The first chapter of A Time for Change.
Chapter One
The dawn broke, flooding the bedroom with light. Danielle stretched and
moaned. Her eyes widened when she touched the clammy skin of the person sharing
her bed. Crap!
She shimmied out of bed, careful not to wake her sleeping companion, and
jumped in the shower. She had hoped that standing underneath the water would
wash away the shame she was feeling. Going over what had taken place the
previous evening, made her question if she really wanted to continue to live
like this.
Her handsome partner, Dean was nice enough, but recently his faults
outweighed the kindness he'd once shown. Faults which grated and tried her
patience daily, maybe her heavy schedule had something to do with that too. But
all the same his attitude toward her over the past couple of weeks had left her
wondering if their relationship was doomed. Hence her amazement to find him
asleep, tucked up in her bed.
The evening had begun as usual, with her being exhausted after a
mentally tiring day's work. Interior designing didn't always live up to its
glamorous TV image. She encountered arguments and disputes between builders and
clients even on the smallest project. Anyway, Dean had rung her at lunchtime,
his lunchtime not hers, nowadays she only had time to grab a sandwich in the
car between locations. He'd ordered her to be ready at seven. She had tried to
argue with him, but he'd insisted she'd been working too hard lately and she
needed a break.
His timing was out of sync with her schedule as usual, but during the
afternoon she'd upped her already hectic pace, and called on her sister,
Claudine to help out at the office, to ensure she'd get home early that
evening.
She'd been with Dean for three years now, maybe the impromptu night out
was him trying to make amends for the way they appeared to have drifted apart
recently. Dean was tall, dark and good-looking, every girl's dream — he just didn't set her world alight. She'd
been more conscious of this lately because of the amount of romcom movies doing
the rounds. Once a week Danielle and her sister settled down to see the latest
movie over a bottle of wine. She'd noticed how the woman always seemed to blush
when the man touched her. Yes, she knew it was different in the movies, but all
the same it left Danielle wondering why she'd never been fortunate enough to
feel that way. In any of her relationships, past or present. Maybe she
was just unlucky, is that why she was prepared to settle for her relationship
with Dean, for fear of sitting at home on her own every night? No the trouble
was boredom. All her relationships had ended because she'd grown bored of her
partner. Was that the problem with Dean?
Arriving at her newly bought, half-renovated Chelsea Mews at four, she
ran a bath in the new bathroom her team had put in a few months ago. She soaked
for the next half an hour in the expensive foam bath her mother had given her
at Christmas, while Curtis Stigers' sexy voice filled the bedroom next door. If
his sexy voice couldn't put her in the right mood then no one could.
Soaping her body she imagined her hands belonged to an insatiable lover.
What an idiot you can be at times Danielle. She washed her long auburn
her and emptied the water. Wrapping the fluffy bath sheet around her, she
returned to her bedroom. She plucked the pink flowing dress she'd only worn
once from the rail, and laid it out on the bed. As it was the beginning of
September, she decided to wear a lacy white cardigan over the top. After
blow-drying her hair she fastened the sides back with some pretty butterfly
combs. She slipped on a pair of wedged sandals, and cursed the fact she'd not
had the time lately to paint her toes. A light application of make-up and she
was set to go.
The doorbell rang at seven on the dot. Another thing that narked her
about Dean, his predictability. She opened the door with a false smile which
dropped the second she saw how handsome he looked in his tuxedo.
"Something wrong?" he asked.
"You should've told me to dress up."
It wasn't the first time he'd done that either, making her suspicious of
his motives. Maybe he likes hogging the limelight.
He shrugged and walked back down the path to the car. "You look
fine."
The smile remained on her face but inside she was livid. Fine, just
fine! Two hours preparation and the only compliment you can bloody come up with
is FINE!
Trotting up the path behind him, already regretting her decision to
spend the evening with him, she asked, "Where are we going with you all
tarted up?"
Her thoughts drifted and she imagined being whisked away in a helicopter
to a deserted island. Dining at a table set for two on the beach, the only
sound nearby the gentle lapping of the waves, a Curtis Stigers melody in the
backgr—
"Did you hear me, Danielle? There you go again, daydreaming as
usual."
"Oh don't start, Dean. Can't we have one night out without
arguing?"
"I said … I'm taking you to the new restaurant in town, the Italian
one in the precinct. The folks at work are raving about it."
Danielle loved a good Italian. The food was delicious and the men
weren't bad either. She chuckled at the thought.
"Well, what are we waiting for then?"
Chivalrous to a fault, he neglected to open the car door for her. Dean
had a smart new company car, a Mercedes sport C300. Mummy and daddy owned an
import and export business, exporting what, she didn't have a clue. Every time
the conversation steered in that direction, she switched off. Dean was a
Mummy's Boy and his parents had always given her the impression they thought
she wasn't good enough to date their son.
They arrived at the restaurant and were shown to a discreet table at the
rear corner of the themed room. On the wall to the left was a mural of a
gondola travelling through the canals of Venice, and on the other a six-foot
picture of the Tower of Pisa stood alongside the Italian flag.
"How about a bottle of Chianti while we choose?"
"That'll be lovely, but I already know what I want." Danielle
looked up at the dark skinned waiter and said, "I'll have the tomato and
Mozzarella to start— "
Out of the corner of her eye she saw Dean raise his hand. "Come
back in ten minutes there's a good chap."
The waiter appeared to be as embarrassed as Danielle. And that's how
life was with Dean. It's my way or the highway. The trouble was she'd had
enough of being dictated to, of not being treated as an equal.
"Now don't go all moody on me. I just wanted to spend the time
choosing a special meal to accompany our special
evening." He paused when the waiter brought the bottle of wine, then he
raised his glass. "To us, it's so nice to finally spend an evening
together, it's been a while."
After taking a sip of wine she asked, "What's so special about this
evening, Dean?"
"Let's see how the evening pans out, shall we? Now, tell me about
your latest job?"
Now she really was suspicious, he never asked about her clients or the
projects that filled her day. In the past two years her business, Intricate
Designs, and her client list had exploded. Okay, I'll play along with your
game.
"Well, Mrs Russell is being a real pain in the rear at the moment.
Apparently, me working fourteen hours a day over the past six weeks hasn't been
enough. Thank God I've nearly finished. She wants the dining room completely
decorated and kitted out by Thursday at the latest. She's holding a dinner
party for the partners of her husband's law firm, she thinks they're going to
ask him to be a partner in the firm. The decorators should be finished by
Wednesday and then I can get on with shopping for the accessories. She wants
the wow factor … are you listening to me?"
Dean had the attention span of a gnat. "What? Oh yes, of course I
was. So it's all finished that's great, on to your next job then, which
is?"
Anger started to build inside but she swallowed it back down. Why
bother getting in a tizzy, I know he'll never change.
"It doesn't matter, Dean."
He didn't even have the decency to look guilty and spent the next ten
minutes, until the waiter came to take their order, rattling off how many
meetings he had managed to cram into his boring day.
Him, him and even more him, why the heck do you put up with it?
When the meal arrived it was one of the best she'd ever tasted, but the
constant drone of his voice left a horrible taint in her mouth.
At nine, just when she thought the evening would never end Dean took her
hand and smiled. "You look tired, hon, how about we call it a night?"
That was fine by her, he was right, his constant chatter had exhausted
her. As they pulled up outside her home she turned in her seat and said,
"Thanks for a lovely time, Dean, I really enjoyed myself."
"Aren't you going to invite me in, sweetheart?"
Danielle cringed, recognising the expectant glint in his eye. "I'm
dead tired, it's been a hectic week … If you don't mind— "
"Nonsense," he said, gently running a finger down her cheek.
Putting on a little boy lost voice, he continued, "We haven't spent the
night together for ages. Anyone would think you're going off me. You're not are
you, darling."
Yes, say it, it's the ideal opportunity, grab the chance. Say it…
"Don't be ridiculous, I'm exhausted that's all." She tried to
sound weary and sighed. "If you want to come in for a quick nightcap, but
only a quick one."
He punched the air. "Yes, I knew I could twist you round my
finger."
Danielle groaned inwardly, why did she always back down like that? Because
I want a peaceful life, that's why, she
answered herself.
They walked into the undecorated lounge. She had major plans for this
room, when she could take time out of her busy schedule to fulfill them.
Danielle switched on the gas fire to take the chill off the room. She turned
around to find Dean standing right behind her. He caught her by the wrist and
began planting wet slobbery kisses on her face and neck. She knew it would be
pointless telling him to stop. This was Dean's attempt at seduction and
Danielle knew what would happen next. He'd drag her caveman style up the stairs
and pin her to the bed for two minutes while he 'made love to her'.
"Let's go to bed, sweetie," he whispered in her ear.
Pushing at his chest her words came out strained. "I think you
should go. I've told you I'm exhausted."
"Oh you always say that, you don't mean it though. Come on, you
know I'll show you a good time." By this time he'd dragged her halfway up
the stairs.
Danielle knew if she fought against him he'd turn nasty, he always did.
She'd do her usual trick of lying back and thinking of England while he enjoyed
himself. By the time they reached the bedroom he was already half-undressed.
"Come on, hurry up, darling, what's keeping you?"
Exactly what's keeping me from sending you packing for good? All she ever wanted was to be treated with
love and respect. To be made love to and not screwed for a change. She wanted
to feel gentle hands caressing her in intimate places, but she knew she'd never
get that with Dean. Danielle slipped out of her dress and underwear and dived
under the silky gold quilt. Undressed, he jumped in the bed beside her.
Danielle turned the light off on the bedside table hoping to lessen her
humiliation. He got on top of her pinning her arms to either side of her head
and murmured, "You know I love you, don't you, babe?" In a second it
was over, her eyes squeezed shut as he rolled off her. He fell asleep in a
nanosecond.
She'd lain awake for hours rigid, too scared to move for fear of waking
him, feeling cheap and dirty.
Coming out of the bathroom she saw Dean was awake, smiling at her as she
scurried across the room to the wardrobe.
After stretching and yawning noisily, he said, "You're up early,
why don't you come back to bed."
"I have an appointment at nine, haven't even got time for coffee
before I leave, don't want to get caught up in the rush-hour traffic."
He pouted like a child. "But I was going to ask you something
special last night, things got in the way. Surely you've got time for a quick
coffee."
Danielle pulled on her black skirt suit and red top and could feel her
temper rising. She had no intention of being late for work. "Nope, just
tell me?" She pulled out her black stilettos and as she stepped into the
final shoe he snapped at her.
"I was going to ask you to marry me."
She lost her balance and fell against the wardrobe, almost pulling the
door off its hinges, and eyed him in disbelief.
"You're kidding me."
"No, I'm deadly serious. We've been together for three years and
the natural progression is marriage. Mummy says it's about time, so how about
it?" He finished his matter of fact sentence with a shrug.
Dumbstruck all she could do was right herself and stare at him.
"But your mother hates me."
"She does not. Well … will you?"
"Dean, I can't deal with this now, I'm going to be late for work.
Let yourself out and make sure you slam the front door when you leave."
His voice followed her down the stairs. "Charming. Is that all
you're going to say?"
"I'll be late. We'll talk later."
Jeez, I don't believe it, he calls that a romantic proposal? Danielle
you picked yourself a good 'un there, not!
Praise for A Time For Change.
4.0 out of 5 stars
Enjoyable, 28 Mar 2012
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This is another enjoyable romance by Mel Comley. Exotic locations, a
horrible boy friend and a handsome admirer. A good story to curl up with
and enjoy reading.
4.0 out of 5 stars
enjoyable read, 9 Dec 2011
By
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I enjoyed reading A Time For Change; it made a change from the normal
books I pick up to read. Mel you have written another gripping novel
again I thought that Lorne Simpkins thrillers were page turning good
stuff but Daniela Pires was just as good. However, in the beginning I
did feel that Daniela did need a kick up the rear end to get her love
life sorted out. Thank god, she did not run her designing business like
her love life or she would have gone bust within six months.Well Done! Mel
5.0 out of 5 stars
A Great Romance, October 28, 2011
This review is from: A Time for Change (Kindle Edition)
This was a great read. I was rooting for Danielle from the first page. I
love the fact that this story is based on real events too.There are sad and funny moments throughout the book and you find yourself siding with Danielle throughout it.
The writing is superb credit to Mel for such an enthralling read.
A worthy five star read.
5.0 out of 5 stars Great romantic read,
By
CarryOnQuack (Dorset. UK) - See all my reviews
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I really enjoyed this novel, the characters came alive on the page for
me and I was soon siding with Danielle, and had the overpowering urge to
kick Dean where it hurts...what a creep.I read A Time For Change in one evening, as I was eager to find out what happened with the other man in Danielle's life, handsome Scott Jordache.
He is quite a mysterious person, and what is he doing on the cruise liner?
No, I can't tell you. You are going to have read this entertaining and sometimes very funny book, yourself. Thank you Mel Comely for another super read. From another satisfied reader.
5.0 out of 5 stars
A delicious romance!, October 14, 2011
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I seldom read romances, but I am so happy I read this one. It's a feel good book all the way through.Oddly, the beginning too many of us can relate to. It touches a raw nerve, and you are so completely on Danielle's side when she meets Scott and finally has the urge to dump her awful awful boyfriend.
I gobbled this book up in a matter of hours. I laughed a lot while reading it. The dialogue is so realistic, and the metaphors and writing style were delightful to read.
It is full of mystery and twists and turns - which again made me really enjoy this book. This book has to be the perfect holiday read!
Scott is delightful, Dean is a a donkey's rear end, and Danielle is a glorious independent woman you'll relate to. The characters were alive, real, tangible, and you are swept up in their moments with them.
Definitely five out of five stars
4.0 out of 5 stars
Romance on Board, 4 Oct 2011
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Whilst I enjoyed this story, I wasn't too fussed on the behaviour of the
two males in Danielle's life. Obviously the "wrong" one was a jerk,
but I found the "right one" to be a bit of a spoilt brat who needed a
slap.The story was a pleasant read and I wanted to be on the trip with Danielle, she seemed like she was having a great time on her own.
4.0 out of 5 stars
A quick read, 2 Oct 2011
By
Lily "mcw9" (Kent UK) - See all my reviews
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This is Mel Comley second romantic book it was ok (sorry Mel you said be honest!) but I like her Thrillers much more.
It was pretty predictable girl with wrong man who is a bully bad abd bad tempered, meets right man who has a secret, follows girl on holiday girl give him a hard time but it all works out ok in the end.
It a good quick read.
5.0 out of 5 stars
Read in one sitting!, 10 Sep 2011
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Another great book by Mel Comley!
Like 'A Time to Heal', this is another romance book by the author (with a little mystery thrown in). I loved this book - it kept me guessing from start to finish!
I loved Danielle as a character and quite often felt myself wanting to give her a hug and tell her everything would work out, and wanting to hit Dean!
The characters are very believable and the story beautifully written. Deffinately recommended!
4.0 out of 5 stars
A Tightly Plotted Romance with a Satisfying Touch of Mystery, September 30, 2011
By
Densewords "H" (France) - See all my reviews
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Mel Comley's brand of wish fulfillment romance makes a pleasing detour
towards her better-known genre of thriller/mystery in the second of a
series that began with "A Time To Heal". In this book Comley's thriller
instinct delivers a strong, tight plot to package deft, and where
appropriate, suitably yummy romance. I find myself wondering if this
marks the inception of a new genre.
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